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I'm now open for commissions. See here for the info: [link]
Here they are! AS PROMISED. lol
Hey guys! It's been a while since I've updated the comic, huh? XD
So.... yea, progression has been slow making interest slim.
Now, it's gonna change! No more long hiatuses. No MORE WAITING! hopefully I think I've got a system down with the help of
which will help progression be regular.
Operation Doomsday will be updated every 2 weeks on Saturday, AND these updates will be TWO pages.
I like having deadlines, otherwise I'd never get anything done, see the comics progression thus far for proof. lol
On one small note, I've changed fonts for the text, because the one I was using before, was a little hard to read from afar.
ANYWAY, hope you guys enjoy these pages, and see you in two weeks!
Thank you to for flat coloring these pages.
Also, a thank you to
for editing these pages.
Thanks for reading!
*Grim-Raider
Some zoomed up clips that are on Bitter's desk:
CHAPTER Two: Interwind Rivalries Part 1
Go here to read Chapter 2: [link]
CHAPTER One: Prolouge
Go here to read Chapter 1: [link]
Here they are! AS PROMISED. lol
Hey guys! It's been a while since I've updated the comic, huh? XD
So.... yea, progression has been slow making interest slim.
Now, it's gonna change! No more long hiatuses. No MORE WAITING! hopefully I think I've got a system down with the help of
which will help progression be regular.Operation Doomsday will be updated every 2 weeks on Saturday, AND these updates will be TWO pages.
I like having deadlines, otherwise I'd never get anything done, see the comics progression thus far for proof. lol
On one small note, I've changed fonts for the text, because the one I was using before, was a little hard to read from afar.
ANYWAY, hope you guys enjoy these pages, and see you in two weeks!
Thank you to
for flat coloring these pages. Also, a thank you to
for editing these pages. Thanks for reading!
*Grim-Raider
Some zoomed up clips that are on Bitter's desk:
CHAPTER Two: Interwind Rivalries Part 1
Go here to read Chapter 2: [link]
CHAPTER One: Prolouge
Go here to read Chapter 1: [link]
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactAlright I was browsing through deviations when I saw this extremely well done and gorgeous comic page.
The colors are extremely vivid, the shading is well done and very nice to look at. You can tell miss bitters created a loud noise as she slammed her palms upon the desk, and quite hard it seems. The style is extremely unique, and I absolutely love Ms.Bitters design. The background may be simple but is seems to work quite well, especially with the nice additional wording on the chalkboard, paper, and even posters.
However Dib's arm is pushed a little far back, and his trench coat is a little off. On the last panel where Ms. Bitters is, her arms are a little short, and the first panel Ms. Bitters hand doesn't look like it's completely on top of the desk because of the angle the desk is pointed. Her hand would be a little lowered to fit the perspective the desk is going at. The speech bubbles, aren't varied, and are using the same tone of voice. When shouting, the bubble would spike up just like when bitters slammed her hand on the desk. The spikes mean something is making a loud noise or shouting in a living person's case.
Otherwise, this comic is very appealing. It easily caught my attention, and is very well drawn. Hope this was helpful!